Trioculus
VileCorp's Muscly Woman-slave
Join date: 2009-06-11
Location: State of Utter Confusion
 |  Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:35 pm | |
| | Thanos6 wrote: | | Trioculus wrote: | Underneath all the blatant copying from the Ray
and Winston scene from the first movie (Note: Go to any of the
Ghostbusters boards and ask about the music cue from that bit!) |
Eh? |
"What's that music they play after Ray and Winston have their talk about God?" is a common Newbie question on the Ghostbusters boards.
(And it's just something Elmer Bernstein came up with) |
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SF3P0X1
Drive-by Camwhore
Join date: 2010-01-04
| | Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:46 am | |
| Thankfully someone necro'd this before me. Okay, I read through this entire snark... it had me in tears in laughter and headache-induced confusion the entire time. But I noticed something that Trio seemed to miss in the concluding chapter, though he did hit part of it. | Trioculus wrote: |
| Quote: | He quickly ran to the others and started up his pack as they formed a line.
“See you on the other side, Winnie.” Brendan said as he fired at Gozer.
“Nice working with you, Dr. Rome.” Winnie said. |
Um...I thought we'd established he'd lied about that doctorate? |
I thought his name was Brendan French? |
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EileenK98
Recovering Fanbrat
Join date: 2009-06-10
Age: 43
Location: very, very close to Chris
| | Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:05 pm | |
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Trioculus
VileCorp's Muscly Woman-slave
Join date: 2009-06-11
Location: State of Utter Confusion
| | Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:22 pm | |
| | SF3P0X1 wrote: | Thankfully someone necro'd this before me.
Okay, I read through this entire snark... it had me in tears in laughter and headache-induced confusion the entire time. But I noticed something that Trio seemed to miss in the concluding chapter, though he did hit part of it.
| Trioculus wrote: |
| Quote: | He quickly ran to the others and started up his pack as they formed a line.
“See you on the other side, Winnie.” Brendan said as he fired at Gozer.
“Nice working with you, Dr. Rome.” Winnie said. |
Um...I thought we'd established he'd lied about that doctorate? |
I thought his name was Brendan French? |
Lo...good catch. Brendan can't keep track of his own character name (Brendan Rome being the writer, Brendan French being the self insert)
I've written a snark on another Brendan story; I gotta get that posted soon. |
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Perverted Demon
Drive-by Camwhore
Join date: 2010-01-08
| | Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:06 pm | |
| I'm gonna go.... [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] lol.... Great posts and thanks for making my day. xD |
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odinsonn
Drive-by Camwhore
Join date: 2010-02-21
Location: Minnesota u.s.a.
| | Subject: Re: Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!! Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:07 am | |
| | Quote: | “Oscar was having some nightmares so I thought I’d stop by the HQ. Of course by then, you were gone and I knew pretty much that the first place you’d go to is the Museum since that’s where Peter told me you were going.”
“Uh,” Brendan said pointing behind them, “As much as I’d hate to break up your Opera moment, Gal-Pals, we’ve got company!” |
I saw this and was horrified. Was Chris-chan going to arrive and make a bad fic worse.(I also apologize for necroing.) |
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