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The Unoriginal
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PostSubject: Gambit plays with his staff...   Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:11 am

...and the artist could almost get away with it if it wasn't for the fact that his foot can't be that foreshortened if it's in front of the staff, 'kay?

The rest of her art is passable - I'm reminded of Casini from some angles, Romita Jr. from others - with the occasional glitch. But it might be taught in school as an example of how not to do perspective.
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PostSubject: Re: Gambit plays with his staff...   Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:34 am

Uhh... Wtf?

Why is his hand in the second picture twice the size of his face?
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PostSubject: Re: Gambit plays with his staff...   Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:01 am

This is what I'd like to call foreshortening gone wild

I mean, how small is that right foot of his?
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PostSubject: Re: Gambit plays with his staff...   Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:11 pm

His fingers look broken, and there seems to be a chunk missing from his right hand's index finger. Also, gravity seems to apply to only half his head, and what the shit dimension is the light source on it coming from? I don't suppose he's supposed to have a half sliver of moon over his head... But I'm not familiar with this character so I could be wrong.


Edit: "I'm regressing" is right... What the shit is this?
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PostSubject: Re: Gambit plays with his staff...   Thu Jul 02, 2009 2:04 pm

Either the front leg is too big, or the back leg is too small.

His near hand looks all wrong. Doesn't the artist have a pair of their own?

The thing about DA is that everybody's scared to give negative crit because the artist might start reporting their own work as being dirty or ripping somebody off.
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