So apparently, according to the examples you gave, you've based this entire comic on stupid puns. It's like Drabbler but in the form of horrible art and way less funny. I also absolutely adore the way you're treating this like a serious project and not just a webcomic. You're referring to it using terms that make it sound as important and professional as the Manhattan Project. Jesus.

And don't kid yourself, your art is well below average. You say you've done illustrations for RPG books and that's exactly what it looks like - the kind of art in RPG books that I try desperately to ignore because it's so bad.

Dodgy, busy, blurry, hard to read. Your compositions are terrible. Stop being so goddamn redundant.

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Here are a couple of peices I did for Paladium's rifts I have done over a 1000 interior peices for a whole host RPG companies. Also we have 6 people that turn out comics so the styles are sometimes radically different. We have also worked on Thor/The Maxx/Wonderwoman/ The Flash/ Dr. Fate/ Impulse and Hawkman (literally dozens of others as well). To say we have an art/writing pedigree would be to beat a dead horse. I would like to see your stuff. Also I always think its cute to hear a critique from a novice.

Way to ego, dipshit. You post on the internet thinking that your experience is the best- that you are the only one worth mentioning. I would have never noticed the difference in styles, you all copy the same How To Draw Marvel books so that's moot. What matters is that none of you have the tact to back off and let a piece speak for itself as opposed to decorating the shit out of it and turning it into a clusterfuck competing for attention.

Again it's not what you know but who you know.

And if your work should speak for itself, why are you defending it?

And Doc, don't go there.

Seconding Nihilist here - stiffness, bad composition and the fucking dodge and burn are your biggest issues.

Keep trying, and try to get better with each picture.

HE DIDN'T DRAW THESE CARTOONS FOR THE LIKES OF YOOOOOOU

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As for art critiques you do realize these are cartoons right? They are not supposed to be proportional anatomy exaggerations are part of cartooning.

Ok tell me how these rate as cookie cutter? Everyone is done in a wildly different style. We try new mediums all the time.

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Ever been to http://rule34.paheal.net ? I could have sworn those images would be perfectly at home with gems like this:


Did you make this too?

Yeah, wake-up call, your work is generic and not funny at all.

BOOBS DO NOT WORK THAT WAY

ALSO WHY DOES MARY JANE HAVE DEFORMED HANDS

AND WHY ARE THEY HAVING SEX ON A RADIOACTIVE BED

THE COLORS THEY MAKE MY EYES BLEED

The way you draw boobs reminds me of

I posted this in the wrong section...

It was supposed to go into FanArt but I clicked Antidotes instead.


In my defense it was damn near 2 am...

Thanks for starting the thread Mythandariel its always greatly appreciated.

No, slim, sweetie, no. What she means is that she meant to post this in our BAD fanart section, and she accidentally put it in Antidotes.

Hey hey mister

How do you become so "successful" while being such an awful artist/writer/person?

Tell me, so that I may learn. :teach:

pics or it didn't happen.

also COMMAS ARE YOUR FRIENDS, GODDAMMIT.